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Lase Mooray Story
Posted: Mon May 25, 2015 6:03 pm
by smartroad
Hi all
I have written a bit of a back story for my character in E:D. Rather then wall of text it here it is available on my blog:
http://gingerlens.co.uk/edblog/index.ph ... ase-Mooray with an eBook version if anyone is THAT interested and would rather read it elsewhere
It is short, only about 2500 words.
Be gentle, its my first go doing something like this
Re: Lase Mooray Story
Posted: Mon May 25, 2015 6:52 pm
by Loriath
Good read. Was seeing the battle in my head as I read it.
Thanks for sharing.
Re: Lase Mooray Story
Posted: Mon May 25, 2015 7:05 pm
by Cmdr Kharma
Just read it......
Like it......Very good.....
A Few spelling and grammar mistakes.....But what the hell
First attempt......
Keep going........
Re: Lase Mooray Story
Posted: Mon May 25, 2015 7:05 pm
by Cmdr Kharma
Loriath wrote:Good read. Was seeing the battle in my head as I read it.
Thanks for sharing.
Ditto......
Re: Lase Mooray Story
Posted: Mon May 25, 2015 7:48 pm
by smartroad
Thanks for the comments
Cmdr Kharma wrote:A Few spelling and grammar mistakes.....But what the hell
Could you point them out (maybe in PM
) I have always struggled with spelling and although did spell check but I know its never fool proof
To improve its always good to know where
Re: Lase Mooray Story
Posted: Mon May 25, 2015 9:59 pm
by Cmdr Kharma
Ok..will do.....
I'll re read tomorrow...As quite drunk at the moment......
Re: Lase Mooray Story
Posted: Mon May 25, 2015 11:29 pm
by Flip
Very good!
Re: Lase Mooray Story
Posted: Tue May 26, 2015 7:33 pm
by Cmdr Kharma
smartroad wrote:Thanks for the comments
Cmdr Kharma wrote:A Few spelling and grammar mistakes.....But what the hell
Could you point them out (maybe in PM
) I have always struggled with spelling and although did spell check but I know its never fool proof
To improve its always good to know where
Ooops forgot about beta launch today......
I have just printed it out and will read it in work tomorrow.....
No doubt when I'm sober it will read fine.....
Re: Lase Mooray Story
Posted: Wed May 27, 2015 11:51 am
by Straylight0
Nice one! If that's a first go, you should go on with this writing thing! Liked the suspense with [SPOILER] the remlock mask and signal.
Could PM you some Grammar Nazi annotations if you like and I can figure PM'ing out?
Re: Lase Mooray Story
Posted: Wed May 27, 2015 1:07 pm
by Flip
To PM a user, click on his/her name, then click on "Send private message". You must have posted on the forum a couple of times before to be allowed to send a PM, but since you already have, that shouldn't be a problem for you.