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Re: Loriaths Logs

Postby Skipp » Thu Aug 20, 2015 8:07 am

Flip - if you just want to change colors for yourself - get the "Stylebot" addon for Chrome and put the CSS changes in it. It will override the web CSS by the one you put in there just for you and make the site dark :)
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New Post: Seat Time

Postby Loriath » Sat Aug 29, 2015 12:35 pm

Been delayed a bit, but here is another chapter.

Seat Time
https://cmdrloriath.wordpress.com/2015/08/29/seat-time/
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Re: Loriaths Logs

Postby Flip » Sat Aug 29, 2015 11:21 pm

Great job as always, Loriath. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Couple of typos I found:

“I won’t Uncle.” I told him and that acknowledgement seemed to be enough for him.

and waved a hand. You could see [she] him shaking his head at her little joke.

I was free and able to go wherever I wanted to, now.
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Re: Loriaths Logs

Postby Loriath » Sun Aug 30, 2015 6:31 am

Thanks Flip.

I appreciate the "You done screwed up here" help from everyone. Editing is best done with someone else's eyes.
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Re: Loriaths Logs

Postby TorTorden » Sun Aug 30, 2015 7:07 am

And that's why I probably shouldn't write stuff.
Cause my personal reaction to this kind of help is more along this. :P
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Looking forward to the next one, regardless of typos :D
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Re: Loriaths Logs

Postby Loriath » Sun Aug 30, 2015 8:12 am

TorTorden wrote:And that's why I probably shouldn't write stuff.
Cause my personal reaction to this kind of help is more along this. :P
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Looking forward to the next one, regardless of typos :D


Hey I would rather get a "Look you idiot, you made mistakes" than nothing at all. Shows at least some people are actually reading it instead of just opening it, going "meh" and moving on.

And that pic is Epic!
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Re: Loriaths Logs

Postby Flip » Sun Aug 30, 2015 12:14 pm

Loriath wrote:Thanks Flip.

I appreciate the "You done screwed up here" help from everyone. Editing is best done with someone else's eyes.


A couple of typos is hardly a screw up! :)
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Re: Loriaths Logs - Theme Change

Postby Loriath » Tue Sep 01, 2015 6:19 am

I was not very happy with the theme I had, so I spent some time last night and managed to find one that I like much better. Any feedback would be appreciated.
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Re: Loriaths Logs

Postby Grifs » Tue Sep 01, 2015 9:47 am

I find the chapters easier to read with this new layout. White, as always, is not really my preferred background color though (i prefer darker colors as they're easier in the eyes). Maybe you could realign the elements to the middle if possible; it doesn't seem to be resizing based on browser width.

Other than that, great work as always!

I can't shake off the feeling of an impending death flag in the dark! Maybe it's because of the detailed character development?! Noooo!

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Re: Loriaths Logs

Postby Loriath » Tue Sep 01, 2015 10:03 am

Grifs wrote:I find the chapters easier to read with this new layout. White, as always, is not really my preferred background color though (i prefer darker colors as they're easier in the eyes). Maybe you could realign the elements to the middle if possible; it doesn't seem to be resizing based on browser width.

Other than that, great work as always!

I can't shake off the feeling of an impending death flag in the dark! Maybe it's because of the detailed character development?! Noooo!


That is the only issue I have with this particular theme, is that it is left aligned. I can't change that. I understand your preference, but I am the opposite, so I win :). It will resize for the main content only it appears, and force the side bars to the footer. I will see if I can find another that is a little better. Thanks

Oh, and as far as you thinking of impending doom, I will just point to Game of Thrones, and say no one is safe, but like GRRM, I am not done yet :roll:
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