
TorTorden wrote:And that's why I probably shouldn't write stuff.
Cause my personal reaction to this kind of help is more along this.► Show Spoiler
Looking forward to the next one, regardless of typos
Loriath wrote:Thanks Flip.
I appreciate the "You done screwed up here" help from everyone. Editing is best done with someone else's eyes.
Grifs wrote:I find the chapters easier to read with this new layout. White, as always, is not really my preferred background color though (i prefer darker colors as they're easier in the eyes). Maybe you could realign the elements to the middle if possible; it doesn't seem to be resizing based on browser width.
Other than that, great work as always!
I can't shake off the feeling of an impending death flag in the dark! Maybe it's because of the detailed character development?! Noooo!
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